Sunday, May 8, 2011

Paper 4

A Partial Literacy Narrative
            A sentence starts out like a lost boy in an amusement park. Afraid, wondering where the rest of his family is. Staring into the vast amount of ideas of where they could be. Confused as he starts to walk around searching, going to back where here started hoping they're there. So many people around him, except his family. He screams for help but no one hears him crying alone, as finally someone comes to aid the young boy. Searching with a partner another group of people come to help. Soon the whole crowd is helping him search. The boy feels almost complete, as he is no longer alone. And finally a smile comes to his face as he sees his family.
            After writing that I have to ask myself, why do I write? And I have to admit; I am not the writing type. It takes a while for me to formulate a single sentence, which becomes extremely frustrating and annoying. For this very reason I choose only to write when I have to. This basically means that I only write for academic reasons. I know that if I complete my writing assignments, I will keep my grades up to maintain a solid grade point average. With that, I will be able to graduate on time with a degree and will eventually earn a high paying job. I also write so that one-day I will become successful because writing is an essential factor when finding a job. I hope that as I continue to write, my skills will become stronger and my language will be more fluent. With great writing comes great success; so although I find writing to be a pain, I will try my hardest to write with the best of my ability.
            Although I may not write for fun, I still have feelings toward my reader. To be honest it all depends on how I feel about the topic. If I don’t have much interest in the topic, I feel my interaction with the reader is strictly business. “You’d think we would have had enough of one another,” since I am forced to write for class all of the time (Collins). I just get straight to the point so my reader can embrace the text. On the other hand if I care about the topic, I will feel more for my reader. I would want to please them with their reading, because who wants to read something that is boring? I want my reader to interact with my writing and be able to visualize what I say. I want my reader to embrace my writing and enjoy him or herself at the same time. “I hate to think of that morning when I will wake up to find you gone” (Collins). The purpose of my writing would be so my readers can react to what I am saying positively or negatively. As long as the reader can joyfully embrace my writing, I know I have done my job correctly. I can’t wait to write another essay “to see your face again” (Collins).
            Writing can only be fun if you make it fun. Do not wait until the night before to begin a writing assignment, because that is not fun at all. In a poem Ron Koertge wrote he mentions, “give up sitting dutifully at your desk. Leave your house or apartment” (Koertge). This is so important when writing. It is almost like nothing ever gets done when you are at home or in your dorm. There are just too many distractions in a place like this. “Not surprisingly, libraries are a good place to write” (Koertge).  Koertge practically took the words out of my mouth there. The most important advice for those starting out is to take breaks during the writing process. “Be like that child. Laugh so loud…” and relax from your work (Koertge). Enjoy yourself while writing.

Tuesday, April 26, 2011

What is Happening to Poor Old Writing?


Writing is Changing
                 
                  Writing today, compared to the ancient Greeks, can be seen as a completely different form of text. It has changed from writing on cave walls, all the way to hypertext on the World Wide Web. In Jay David Bolter’s book, Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of Print we see writing as a structure in time and space. Readers see a pattern of signs, taking in portions at a glance, sending them on a journey through symbolic space (Bolter). He explains that text is much like musical notes in the way in which we absorb what is being read. This changes as time goes by and technology advances the space. Consider that the medieval codex uses a pattern of rubrication and various sizes of letters. The Codex then moves along to printed book, which is arranged into paragraphed pages. Finally revolutionizing to computers using a pattern of text windows and images on a screen (Bolter 99). When we consider print books versus digital books, we conclude that writing is changing in this digital age creating a form of control when reading. Bolter asks as technology of writing advances, “how and to what extent does the writer control the readers experience of reading” (Bolter 101)? Dialogues can be seen written as linear paths, then slowly become more hypertexual in modern day.
            Bolton begins to talk about how to read one must follow along a path from a layout of text. He gives you an idea about the papyrus roll fitting perfectly into this suggested theory. “The papyrus roll gave the readers very few options, as ancient writing was strictly linear” (Bolter 100). According to Alex’s prezi, the papyrus roll was a sheet that could be as long as up to 25 feet long of linear text (Breen). It was written in a style called “boustrophedon,” which the line ran from right to left, bent around, and continued from left to right (Bolter 100). This is a great example of a perfectly linear form of writing. The reader is than forced to journey through symbolic space in one distinct linear path. There are no pages to go ahead or turn back to; it is just one piece of text.
            The linear form of dialogue such as the papyrus roll was not always the case. According to Bolter a less linear form of dialogue was actually, “posed in the absence of writing- in purely oral forms of storytelling and poetry” (Bolter 101). These stories or poems do not have a visual structure, but are normally spoken with a linear plot. The control of dialogue is held in the hands of the storyteller, who is “free to deviate from the storyline without fear that a written text will prove him or her wrong” (Bolter 101). He also mentions that the Homeric storyteller may even adjust the story to fit the audience that is listening. Forms of control can be seen more accessible here as the storyteller can adjust and deviate from the storyline. Control is also in the hands of the listener who can either change the story, or leave it the same.
            As we move along the timeline of writing we see, “a compromise between oral and written controlling structures” (Bolter 104). These oral and written structures are what we know as speeches and poetry. ”Writers in these genres used structures that could be appreciated in reading aloud or in reading to others who do not have their own texts” (Bolter 104). This was a very interesting form of dialogue, which was similar to “absence of writing” found in storytelling. Although they were similar, there was a new technique used called “ring composition” (Bolter 104). Storytellers would proceed to tell a story and slowly deviate on an interesting detail, and then would inform the audience that he was resuming the original storyline (Bolter 104). These were linear stories with occasional interruptions, which are greatly different to ancient works, which were strictly one way of text.
            The linear forms of writing can be seen also when the invention of the codex and the book appeared. “Poets began to offer books of short poems that could be sampled; historians and academics began to write essays on scholarly subjects” (Bolter 104). These books helped the linear structure of text stay alive along with creative narratives. “A scholarly essay should lead the reader step by step through its argument, making clear how each piece of evidence is relevant” (Bolter 105). Either way you look at this the person who wrote this has the control of the text. Although they have no control of a linear story, the reader still has some control. Bolter mentions, “it may in general be harder to hoodwink a reader than a listener, because the reader can stop at anytime, reflect, and refer to a previous section of the text.” (Bolter 102). The reader has more control of the dialogue they are receiving because they are able to go back and re-read, where as if they were listening to a story, once the line has been said there is no going back.
            Writing has changed from written form to hypertextual form. Not only has it changed but also we are able to transcribe old dialogues to hypertext. “Texts that were originally written for print or manuscript can be not only transferred to a machine-readable form, but also translated into hypertextual structures” (Bolter 110). This is very helpful for researchers who would like to research past texts using a database. The only problem with this is, “in some cases the translation would refashion texts into form closer to their original, conversational tone” (Bolter 110). Is it worth the change if the contents are being altered? For example Bolter mentions, “they make it easier to read Sophacles, but they change the Sophacles that we read” (Bolter 110). It is basically a win/lose when it comes to ancient texts being transcribed to hypertext. We win because they make it much more convenient and easier to read the texts, but we lose because some of the information is lost or altered.
            There may be problems with transcribing old texts to the World Wide Web, but maybe making new essays is helpful through hypertext. Hypertext is a non linear path of  writing through the internet which can lead to other texts by the click of a button. “A hypertextual essay in the computer could in fact be fashioned as a dialogue between the writer and her readers” (Bolter 112). This could help dialogues between people through internet without being with each other in person, but they would be with each other through cyber space. “Instead of one linear argument, the hypertext could present many, possibly conflicting arguments” (Bolter 112). Instead of writing an essay in a book with a limit of arguments, it can be helpful to write in hypertext. According to Bolter, hypertext could remediate the voice of text, and suggest the return to oral forms of dialogue (Bolter 112). It is bringing the old forms of writing, dialogue, and essay, together in one form of hypertext. “The success of the World Wide Web derives from the ways in which it borrows from and reforms not only print, but also graphics design, photography, film, and television” (Bolter 113).
            Writing is changing and there is no way to stop it. Bolter mentions that we are now learning dialogues in new ways that use hypertext rather than books. “Teachers of writing and reading in particular have been willing to redefine the genres and the practices into which they initiate their students” (Bolter 113). Writing is now being taught through hypertext. For example you can look at what professors make students do for their class. In Alison Hudecek’s blog on Blogger.com you can see class work and homework from an entire semester. She writes arguments through hypertext, and it is open for others to respond and create more arguments (Hudecek). This is proof of Bolter’s point earlier with hypertext creating a less linear argument. The professor for this class has created a, “networked classroom as a means for social or political change, as they combine digital writing with various strategies with cultural critique” (Bolter 114).  This is seen in Alison’s blog as other classmates question, argue, or critique her dialogues. The way we write is changing; therefore we are forced to learn how to write differently.
            A very simple question that has a very complex answer; What is happening to writing? As we look at Bolter’s views from ancient writing to current hypertext, we see text change slowly but surely. The complex answer to the simple question is that writing is in fact changing. We see it change for the good, and sometimes the change is not so good. It is helpful to be able to access hypertext at any time and space, where it is much more difficult if it was written text in a book. The literature is changing to hypertext; therefore we are forced to learn the new ways of writing. Through Bolter’s work, we are able to notice that text is indeed changing, who knows what will come next.





 Works Cited

Bolter, J. David. Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of             Print.             2nd ed. Mahwah, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, 2001. Print.

Breen, Alexander. "Chapter 5: The Electronic Book by Alexander Breen on Prezi." Prezi             - The Zooming Presentation Editor. 13 Apr. 2011. Web. 23 Apr. 2011.             <http://prezi.com/refri2vsrwys/chapter-5-the-electronic-book/>.

Hudecek, Alison. "Raise Your Voice." Web log post. Blogger. Web. 24 Apr. 2011.             <http://aliswritingalley.blogspot.com/>.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

The Electronic Book

Chapt 5

Observe:
Their writing was linear, kind of like a timeline. It was very informing though, I feel like I know everything about Papyrus rolls and Codexs. Very well put together, very interesting how physical writing slowly changes to electronic, and is still changing.

Infer:
The Papyrus roll. The Codex replaced the Papyrus roll. The Book, with paper and pages along with a cover, it was something physical. The eBook aka electronic book took away the paper, getting rid of pages. The encyclopedia contains a mass amount of print holding large amounts of information. The Digital library, there is no more physical building. Cyberspace will take the Papyrus, Codex, Book, eBook, Encyclopedia, and Library, will all be as one.

Questions:
How does an eBook imitate a Codex?
How is google an encyclopedia? Not everything is legible on the internet.
Will physical libraries be replaced by google, or the "Digital Library?"
Is there a value of the book lost when its from physical books to internet?

Monday, April 11, 2011

The Breakout of the Visual

Observe:
The presentation had a lot of good points, although some had a large amount of information with a small font which made it a little difficult to read at points. They had very clear examples such as the graph, it was easy to understand their points.

Infer:
Pictures versus plain text. Print is changing, there are more visuals. Print can make visuals with metaphors. Print makes readers into viewers. Words are now pictures. The electronic book and electronic magezine. Hyper media and hypertext. Email cannot give visuals.


Quesitons:
Why can't email offer visuals if you can attach visuals?
Do electronic magazines have more visuals to offer than electronic books?
How can you make visuals with no pictures in books?

Monday, April 4, 2011

Hyper Text and the Remediation of Print

Telephone game:
"Thinking critically about the Bolter chapter"

Observe:
    Their details about hypertext was very informing for understanding what it is and how it is used. Their prezi was not linear because it jumps all around and they also have hypertext within. I found it interesting that they made their text extremely small so they had to zoom in. Which made them have to use the method of "zooming in" on the text.

Infer:
    Hyper texts are useful for writers because it helps readers allow to make their reading linear or not. They also can be used as links on a website to make searching the web easier.

Question:
  What negative effects could happen if there are no hypertexts?
   Does hypertext actually give the reader control or is it really an illusion?
   If it is an illusion, what is the purpose of making an illusion?
  

Thursday, March 31, 2011

Crayon

Well the first thing easily noticed is that there are a few colors being used. Luke started with a maroon heading, followed by an orange, purple, then again maroon body paragraphs. The way he wrote this was very punctual, with a heading, and three separate body paragraphs. The line spacing is very equal making it easy too read. It is almost as if he wrote it on a separate paper and copied it over because there are no cross outs or mess ups, except for the last word. But you can't blame him, I'm sure all of us were tired of writing with these crayons. I mean there wasn't anything spectacular but I did notice that he purposely did not write near the crease of the paper so it wouldn't look messed up. Here is Luke's assignment:

Luke Verrilo
Professor Lay
WSC 2
28 January 2011
    In her poem "Tell All The Truth," Emily Dickinson urges readers to tell the truth entirely, though she also stresses the importance of telling it slant. in some instances, one can skew the truth to protect children's  innocence, for example, however that is not always the case. As Dickinson states, the "truth must dazzle gradually," implying that there are sometimes the truth, unslanted, must come out and be told as it is. Though we're taught to always tell the truth, we're also shielded from it.
   In today's violent world, the true truth is hidden from us more than we may realize. When we read about war in the papers, victories are headlines while tragic losses are hidden among obituaries. When we're young, issues like divorce or murder or the passing of loved ones are sugarcoated. Stories are created and explanations given to sotten the hurt. However, as we age and become more aware of our world and learn to separate truth from "explanation kind," we gradually learn of more dark aspects of life. As Dickinson writes, it's better to take the truth little by little rather than all at once when you're young so as to avoid "every man be blind."
   I agree with Dickinson's stance on telling the truth, but telling it slant. It's not a lie, however, but it protects children from the truth until they're ready to gasp the entirety of it. The only time that slanting the truth isn't acceptable is when the media or people in general do it so they can push their own agenda. Slanting the truth on issues of war or death are done to ease the pain, not for personal gain. Dickinson supports shielding people from the world's horrors, as I do. Sometimes, it's best not to know the complexity within the darkness of the world around us.


This writing assignment interacts with the writing space and mind. There is a limited amount of space for the writer which effects what can be said. If the writer runs out of space, how will anyone be able to read what needs to be said? The mind is an endless space for writing, which can't be placed on a piece of paper. The fact that this assignment was in crayon helped the mind use more space on the paper by using different colors, and allowing the writer to write any way they wanted. This is true because this piece is made with 3 different colors, and other crayon assignments were made in all shapes and sizes.

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

In The Dark

Well there are plenty of times where I am embarresed with my communication. When i speak sometimes i tend to stutter or mumble and I sound kinf of dumb. My friends usually make fun of me because it really does sound funny. but the MOST embarresing is the fact theat i can't speak spanish to others. I am Puerto Rican and i spent my entire summer there last summerfor soccer. Alot of the players spoke only spanish which was very frustrating. Not only with regular conversation, but when on the feild. Communication is very important on the feild and when there is no talk or understanding between the players you most likely will lose. When were not on the feild and i was in the community trying to order food somtimes was difficult. i speak a little spanish, but not fluent so understanding others speak it is difficult. Why this is so embarresingto me is because my mom speaks fluent along with hersisters and their mom. Alot of my friends also make fun of me because i cannot speak spanish.