Sample H:
1. The main reason I enjoyed reading this is because I also wrote about the iPod as a small object, but we used different large subjects. Now I have a different view on the iPods large subject.
2. The argument was very strong in details about media within the iPod, on my paper I didn't go into as much details that they did.
3. I agree with when Sample H argues that people feel more comfortable buying an Apple product rather than a different type of Mp3 player that does the same things
4. This was a great title choice for Sample H because within the paper there are endless amounts of media used within an iPod.
5. The phrase "cultural icon"is perfect for this icon because within this argument the writer mentions the culture is completely mesmerized by this small object.
6. It's hard to say that this paper moved me into thinking new ways of the object because I wrote about the same object, so mostly the reason I was moved was from number 1.
Sample G:
1. This paper helps me realize why others use Red Bull and how it helps them with their lives
2. There are a lot of statements mentioned with information I did not know
3. The statement about the "Door Close" button being worn out is a great example about Americans because we are always in a rush.
4. I can see now that Red Bull is a good source for quick energy when needing to focus on certain objectives
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