A sentence starts out like a lost boy in an amusement park.
Afraid, wondering where the rest of his family is.
Starring into the vast amount of ideas of where they could be.
Confused as he starts to walk around searching,
Going to back where here started hoping they're there.
So many people around him, except his family.
He screams for help but no one hears him
Crying alone, as finally someone comes to aid the young boy.
Searching with a partner another group of people come to help.
Soon the whole crowd is helping him search.
The boy feels almost complete as he is no longer alone.
And finally a smile comes to his face as he sees his family.
very lyrical --- great showing -- the reader goes to the moment that the boy experiences
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